Friday, August 27, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Josh,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the work that you have done this week.
Looks like you have done a great job! I am sure your dad will love this.
I look forward to reading your next blog post!
Miss Lauder 🌸
Hi Josh,
ReplyDeleteWell done on sharing your writing about your Father. I like that you've listed some special things about him. Next time, in your writing, perhaps you could vary your sentence lengths to make them more interesting to read. Remember you can do this by using words like 'because' 'so that' 'while' etc.
Can you please remember to post a blurb about your task.
Miss McLeod
Hi Josh, thank you for sharing your fathers day slide. Maybe next time you could add a blurb telling us what you have done. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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